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Here follows the Rime of Eternal Night,
That will keep the Moon up to its full height.
Embrace the dark tranquil of the twilight,
And shun the blazing fury of daylight.
Find your peace inside silent Light-in-Dark,
While covering with haze all unfit marks.
Suspend in time the moment with your spell,
Journey and sound the midnight's silent bell.
Come and escape the Order for just one day,
Come frolic in the grass, so young and gay.
These lines shall protect this heavenly sphere,
And will stay for all eternity here.
    So now that this Rime of Night is adjourned,
    The reign of the Sun is elsewhere sojourned.
A sonnet written in iambic pentameter. Rhyme scheme AAAABBCCDDEEFF (weird, I know)
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:icondarkmagshin:
Cool poem, but the mispelled 'rime' instead of 'rhyme' just ruins it for me.
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schnrfl Jan 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hurrdurr, it's not misspelled - it's merely an older version of spelling
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:icondarkmagshin:
even so, i still don't understand why you would spell it that way when in the story it is spelled 'Rhyme' anyways, but i guess i'm just nitpicking.
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:iconsomekindaspy:
I was waiting for the "Ash nazg durbatulūk" part.
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schnrfl Dec 22, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What does this have to do with LoTR?

>> confused
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:iconsomekindaspy:
Just sounds like something awesome like that...

It's a complement on its awesomeness!
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schnrfl Dec 24, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
haha. Ash nazg durbatulūk, ash nazg gimbatul,
Ash nazg thrakatulūk agh burzum-ishi krimpatul.
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AGenericReality Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
<33333333333
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MasterMitosi Dec 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Awesome!
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:iconinfamous-spartan:
but WHAT DOES IT ALL MEAN
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